*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/bi-bug
Review Requests: OFF
5 Public Reviews Given
5 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I have yet to come up with a solid review style, but I can try to sum up what I do now. I always try to acknowledge the good in a passage before criticizing anything I feel is wrong or can be better. I don't go too deep into detail, nor can I offer any sold explanations for what I feel is wrong, but I do try my best.
Favorite Genres
My favourite genres are drama, short stories, mystery, real life, fantasy,and medieval.
Least Favorite Genres
My least favourite genre is horror.
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of Free Yourself  
Review by Bi-bug
Rated: E | (2.5)
Bravo for the inspirational Poem. I find it quite motivational for me. I suggest, though, that you think about the first paragraph where it says," Leads to one's self doubt." and then almost immediately changes the subject to a more specific "Your(you)". While this can be cracked down to mere personal opinion, I feel that the change in subject can catch the minds of avid writers. All in all, I do not see any major flaws in the passage and hope for you the best in your writing career. Love, Bi-bug.
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/bi-bug