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I will copy all of your mistakes for you to see so, that you can correct them. I am kind and supportive, but will be honest about what I think it is lacking. I love reviewing poetry and short stories mainly. I will review anything though. I will always lift you up and never tear you down. You will find inspiration in my reviews.
I'm good at...
Poetry, short story, and novels or novella reviews, but will review anything. I need the experience.
Favorite Genres
Christian, poetry, romance, fight for survival kind of novels. I like short stories a lot about anything. Horror, thrillers, and just about anything else is on my list of what I will review.
Least Favorite Genres
Anti-Christian material.
Favorite Item Types
Christian romance, Christian inspiration.
Least Favorite Item Types
anti-Christian material,erotica, gay/lesbian,
I will not review...
I will review anything to broaden my horizons.
Public Reviews
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I find you again in "review a newbie" and find that I love this poem so very much.
My favorite part is:
The soul speaks through silence in the darkness

And as a tiny wish finally escapes my mind

I'll find my faith in God despite the darkness that I feel

And pray my soul will find some peace and forget the medical crime...

I can feel the heartache in this poem. I am so glad the person has faith in God to get him or her through this difficult time in their life. I can't wait to see what else you have to say.
Billiegail
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Review of WHISPERS  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. It threw me for minute because there were no periods but, I figured it out.
I find that this poem is very reflective and shows the inner turmoil that she goes through.
My favorite part is:
She falls to her knees overwhelmed by pain and exhaustion

Going blind from confusion feeling lost and alone

Each day she waits for the whisper she's longing to hear

Where is the whisper that welcomes her home

Keep on writing. You did a great job.
Billiegail
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Review of On Mother's Day  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Congratulations on the win. It is a beautiful poem.
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A very good short story. I loved every second of it. I had no idea it was the husband doing it. It took my by surprise. She had everything and threw it away all because she wasn't communicating everything there is to communicate to her husband. I will be reading more of your work. You are going to write a very telling book young lady or young man.
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with 30-Day Bloggers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love your piece. I did not really do an "interactive introduction" because I am new to this and I didn't quite "get it". I hope to become a better blogger and start understanding how things are done and to take things quite literal when they are being said. I have a habit of thinking inside the box! It was nice to meet you.
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In affiliation with 30-Day Bloggers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have to say that I am jealous. If only I could win the lottery then I could travel to all those places as well. Either that or get several books I have yet to write published. he he
It sounds as though you have really been able to enjoy this beautiful planet God created. I am happy that you have. I think you did a great job of explaining it all to us. I found it fascinating.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am blown away at your ability to write this at the tender age of 15! When you read it to me over the phone I could not help but, think of what color I am and how I would describe it. It is beautiful and you should be proud of yourself. This is one of my all-time favorite poems from a very dear person.
God bless you
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In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent! Bravo for that great job. I am a poet but, I'm surprise e I couldn't pull that out of my head.
Great form. You did a brilliant job of this type of poetry. I might have to try it this week.
This poem reminds me of my sister and Other
. We raised our children in completely different ways. In the end the kids grew to be great members of the world.
I was the "don't touch that" and she was the "go ahead, I don't care" .
This poem is one of my all time favorites. I hope you will allow me to show this to my sister?
Keep write. You know a lot about poetry. I hope to learn from you or someone as talented as you.
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Review of Dark Knight  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi there ! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! I am
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 Dark Knight   (13+)
A moment, captured and preserved in the depths of time. No regrets, no judgements.
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*BulletB* Personal Impression: It took me to a personal place where this exact thing happened to me. I truly enjoyed it.
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*BulletB* Tone & Mood; Good sexy mood.
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*BulletB* Rhyme, Form & Flow: Good flow and form. No rhyming but, it did flow really well.
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*BulletB* Emotional Impact: Like I said, it happened to me so, it took me back to a place in time that I enjoyed very much so.
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*BulletB* Grammar/Punctuation: No errors that I could see. Good writing
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*Ex claim* Please remember that you are best judge of what is right for your poem
*Ex-claim* Whatever another person says -- especially me *Exclaim* -- whether positive or negative, is just their opinion *Exclaim* You are the only one who can decide what is right for your poetry.
*Exclaim* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and
I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This reminds me of my husband mowing our lawn.
My favorite part: about the Longwood.
You did a great job with this poem. Keep up the hard work.
Billie
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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am taking a class on this stuff as we speak but, I am just not getting some of it. I think I need to be exposed to a little more. Reading this really helped me grasp it a little better and I will be coming back to reread it more often. I think you made some great points that should definitely be followed. I will follow them to the letter when writing my book. I am doing the Character sheets now. Thank you for writing this and I pray more people like me will see it and will gain a better understanding of what it takes to write a book.
You did a great job and I hope to see more of this in the future.
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Review of Spilt Milk  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this would make a great book. I really enjoyed it and it definitely gives you reason to pause. I have never had an imaginary friend but, I have a brother who had imaginary friends that he blamed things on. He believed in ghost and felt that they were out to get him. He would not sleep at night and would walk in his sleep when he did sleep. He would go to the kitchen and get knives out of the drawer and blame it on his friends even though he was caught doing it.
I don't understand it really and this gives us something to consider. Is there really ghost or imaginary friends that are real and can do things like this?
I know that I have had an experience with ghost before. They are scary.
You did an amazing job putting this together and I'd definitely read the book if you write it.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. I am bipolar and I feel like I am losing my mind all the time.l am in an intense manic mood right now when high levels of agitation. I am trying to do all I can to alter my mood but, you know that I can't do it. It is frustrating. You are a great writer. Keep up the good work. I really enjoyed it.

Billie Turknett
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Review of Rocking  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Oh how heart wrenching that has to be. I put myself in her place and one of my three sons and I know that I would try to change hm as well but, people need to be accepted for who they are and not what their body art shows. I contradict what I just said because I do believe people tend to express themselves and their feelings by wearing ink or odd clothing.
Thanks for sharing it
Billie
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Review of Breathe  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This relaxed me as I said it a few times. It is nice and clean. Fresh and pure. I like it a lot. Good writing. I hope to read more of your work in the future.

God bless
Billie
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Review of SkyCanoeing  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Sounds like something I'd love to do. I would highly recommend the parachute next time though. How do you guide yourself to the water or do you just jump over the sea instead of having to be guided? I like your style!
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Review of Walls  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh this makes me sad. I am a Christian and I hope this isn't about your faith in God. It sure seems that way but, we can have faith in anything can't we? I really like your poem. It is well written and well defined. It has a great flow.
Keep writing. It is great.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I saw myself in the poem. It is a real good poem. It seems to want to rhyme in parts and then not.I write poetry but, I am not all that familiar with forms of poetry so, I am not sure where this one fits in but, it is quite good. I'd say to keep writing because you have what it takes to write them.
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Review of One step  
Rated: E | (4.0)
The only confusing part is where your "Standing" behind the wall while in the next line you are "holding on" to the wall. Are you able to stand without a wall or did you suddenly not be able to stand anymore and had to grab on to the wall? Other than that I think it is a great poem. I really enjoyed it.
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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I couldn't have written this better.. It is amazing how you described us to a T. I am bipolar and thank you for educating others about our disease. Most of my family and friends think it's "all in my head" and it is devastating to me to know they won't take the time to educate themselves about my problem. I'd do the same for them.
I enjoyed reading it and will read what you write more in the future.
Thanks
Billiegail


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