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Rated: E | (4.5)
I read your poem and I felt that that is what we strive to do all our lives. This is the gist of a human life. We educate ourselves and then try to get a better job so that we could have the best life partner in our life. And our whole life revolves around this...and by the time we achieve this...we are above thirty.

You've used an excellent vocabulary to explain the scenario and it looks like you've spend a lot of time on this work. I really liked it ...in fact I've been thinking about this for the past couple of days and just now I came across your poem....just a coincidence.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It was nice and short. I really liked it. Especially the ending was really touching. Nice work!
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