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Review of His Majesty  
Review by Belinda
Rated: E | (3.0)

Very nice. I believe you could add more to it to make it stronger.
Keep up the great work!
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Review of Texting  
Review by Belinda
Rated: E | (3.0)


Very good. Unfortunately, there are many real life stories like this today.
Just maybe communication will have a come back! :)

Keep up the good work.
Have a blessed day!
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Review of Take A Step  
Review by Belinda
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow!

Very good! Really enjoyed, "One step at a time, eyes forward and never looking back."
and the line "Life's a workout, give it your all till the last rep"

Wonderul descriptions. This is what I am endeavoring to do right now.
Thank you,
Have a blessed day!
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Review of Light My Way.  
Review by Belinda
Rated: E | (3.0)
Very nice!
I enjoyed the line "Children lie sleeping under cool cotton sheets,
while dreams brusquely whisk them away."

Keep writing.
Have a blessed day!
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