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Review of Fragility  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the way you describe the tear that Olivia had, I don't really read this type of writing much although you are good at your writing.

Bob
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Some of the words were mising others misused and a couple mispelled. This should have been proof read although the story was good. You have a talent for writing and developing a good story.

Bob
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