WOW! This was an amazing story. I loved it. I liked the way it unraveled. I thought you did a great job at introducing the character. I thought you did a great job on describing the setting without diverting from the story or slowing down the pace. I liked the way the story started at one point and came full circle back to point a. It was a great tale I had some good laughs. It's an all around good read. I thank you for sharing and crave more in the future.
Being a dog lover, I really enjoyed this. It makes very clear the simplicity of a dogs mind and a dogs undying loyalty to its owner. It really conveys the relationship between man and dog. It was an all around feel good read. I wouldn't change it a bit. Thanks for sharing and hope to see more in the future.
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