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Review of Free  
Review by Thomas Boone
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like it. Pretty straight forward answer but it's true, I like this. The only thing I would change is that in my opinion you say this term a few to many times. "Free Spirits of Light and Energy." Maybe try cutting out this section and seeing if it still flows well for you. "For we are
Free Spirits of Light and Energy."
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Review by Thomas Boone
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really like this, I feel the sadness that she does. The section where you write the things she wrote to him is pretty sad not going to lie. (Which is a good thing) it also makes me want to know more about the situation. I want to know how he died I want the full story after reading this. Good job:)
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Review of glitter  
Review by Thomas Boone
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this a lot. The structure and wording help compel emotion. I especially like the words you used like "pierces" and how you say "holes in my body where the light cuts through me like a knife" very good work please keep up the good job you have a lot of talent :)
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