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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very entertaining! I laughed at the king. Poor witch. You painted a great description of the witch with little text involved, which isn't easy to do.

I wonder, who was her new lover? Can you mention what he looks like/who he is? Maybe just add in an extra stanza.

All in all, I enjoyed it. Happy Halloween!
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