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Rated: E | (3.5)
This was very enjoyable to read! Well done! I liked the rhymes and the poetic aesthetic that the poem brought. Although, I think towards the end the subject shifted from reminiscing about your childhood into praising God. It was a little bit of an unexpected subject change, but don't fret too much about it. Overall it was a very nice piece.

Thanks for sharing, and keep on writing!~
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