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Review of Rockabee  
Review by Cloudy Skies
Rated: E | (4.5)
You know what? You can EASILY become an auther one day. You are able to catch the readers attenton at the veary begining of the story. I also enjoyed that you involed the reader. I also liked that you made the ending unpredictible. Yes Vee died at the end, but I think it fit well enough with your storyline.
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