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Review of Trick or Tweet  
Review by D. H. Paradox
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really love your idea, it was a great and purposeful story. Glad to see I'm not the only one a bit scared of technology. Your pacing was great, it really kept me hooked. I felt that sometimes description could be added, like the intense sorrow and chaos during the Attack.
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Review of Ruin  
Review by D. H. Paradox
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, I really love the strong emotion this invokes. It flows very well too. Amazing job. My only complaint is that I wish is was longer
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