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Review by teddybear
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I sense neuroticness within this character. A fun puppy love moment. I liked the way you kept the theme by using food to describe the emotions. I think you could write an uplifting funny no nonsense type of story and should go for it. I would caution on the flow of words as it can be overwhelming if to much is involved
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