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Review of MY BROTHER'S EYES  
Review by carlster
Rated: E | (4.5)
sounds like you got yourself a special brother.
I liked the poem it was really good it was short sweet and simple it had no confusing parts which was good i like the poem is was a good poem
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Review by carlster
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
it's pretty powerful in the decriptive point of view. Personally i dont like reading sci-fi but i read this and it was really good. From the first couple of sentences you cought my attention. Which is what you want to do you want to catch the readers attention with decriptive words sentence structure and NO spelling mistakes because then the reader will doubt that you are educated and shortcuts like; cuz, wat, u, ur. arent a valid form in a writing piece hope i helped. (Not saying you put any chortcut words in because im 90 percent sure you didn't)

i would greatly appreciate if you reviewed my poems search: candoo. Im a average poem writer and apreciate any constructive critism

and again thank you for writing this writing piece :)
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Review by carlster
Rated: E | (1.0)
even if i do read it i dont get the concept
huh?huh?Huh?
its reallly confusing
also i dont get the abrieveabtions of imb ihg or whatever it is there really isnt a point to this poll if you can take it somewhere else which u specifically said could i dont know
i guess it is useful. Some people are just too lazy to surf the internet

p.s also search cnadoo and comment on poems and quotes plz and thank u
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