I agree with what you're saying. Children can be cruel to other children, no doubt. Adults can do more damage to the dreams of children without even knowing it by simply not acknowledging their mind's creativity. Let them dream. Let them have high hopes so they have something to pursue later in life BUT let children be children. Magic and fairy tales; Santa and the Tooth Fairy (to name a couple) are important for their development. The world is a harsh place for adults to deal with the realities of everyday life so why not let children dream. Thanks for your inspirational thoughts. Keep writing!
Peace always,
Chatabit
#509
The first thought that comes to mind is "seeing is believing". Thank you for spending as much time as you obviously did thinking about the how and why "accidents" happen. Your faith is strong and that shows through in writing this item. I only question any part where "he" is written (unless referring to the magician), He (God) would be capitalized, I believe.
I don't know your specific religion but would like to offer a suggestion for further reading. I often refer to this section: 1 CORINTHIANS 12., 13., 14., 15., 16.
I will go to your port to read other items you've posted. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing. Peace always,
Chatabit
#508
Thank you for this informative item. It gives suggestions and recommendations for making change with supporting documentation. I have not read through the "References".
A note about "just compensation", a fair market value is established. An appraisal is required however it is in the best interest of the owner to have their own appraisal prepared. Unfortunately, depending on the size of the property/home/land, it can become very expensive. Additionally, more than one appraisal will be required if the owner wants to dispute the value of "just compensation" established by the government.
Another factor to consider is called the "highest and best use". Once again the value determined by the government for FUTURE use (not necessarily the current zoning in place at the time of the appraisal) would more than justify THEIR change of ZONING to allow the "public use" of private property. The government will consider the increase of real estate taxes as part of "highest" and best use.
When the public (community affected in that surrounding area) is asked to comment, it would be wise to stand up and attend the meetings which allow the government officials to change the current zoning! Do NOT give in. Do NOT let your guard down. It's not a surprise that the meeting will be postponed until another time when attendance is lower. The lower the number of people in the public meeting, the better for them to succeed. There is strength in numbers when opposing such changes as the government officials propose. Be ready and be organized to vote against any changes to the current zoning.
I wish you well on your speech! Also remember that local government officials are usually elected by the communities they serve so keep that in mind for election time! Peace always,
Chatabit
#506
This was sad and the way you compared it to the rose bush made me realize that so much more is effected by a repossessed home. Nature can take care of itself except when people have brought in plants that aren't native to the natural habitat...individuals have to take care of these special plants.
What bothers me about the repossessed home is that it sits vacant until it's sold at auction. With all of the homeless people in the world, why not lease/rent these properties (short term). Taxes still have to be paid regardless of if it's vacant or occupied. The bank/owner/investor still has to pay the homeowner association fees regardless of if it's vacant or occupied. The utilities (water and electric) are usually turned off and that doesn't help the condition of the home. It makes no sense to kick people out of homes if a solution can be made to negotiate a partial payment of any amount (temporarily).
I am angry at the fact that people can invest as much as 30% for a downpayment (and have equity in the property/home) yet a TAX bill or homeowner association FEE can bring about a foreclosure! The amount of the outstanding TAX does not necessitate the sale. New laws should be made to prevent this from ever happening. Someone who owns a property/home free and clear (paid off the mortgage) should never have to leave because of unpaid TAXES or FEES. The alternative is to place a LIEN on the property/home in lieu of foreclosure.
In my opinion the "American Dream" has become a nightmare for many people because of the lack of enforcing rules and regulations that were already in place but not followed. Ok, I'm stepping off the soapbox. Thanks for listening to my rant/rave. Keep writing! Peace always,
Chatabit
#505
Hi. Interesting opinion about raising children. There are thoughts that I agree with and some I do not agree with. I believe people should not have children so that someone else can take care of them. How will someone else know my child's needs, feelings and acceptable behavior. How can someone else teach my child an acceptable moral upbringing which only I can enforce...they don't, won't and can't.
Basically the need to have a child attend daycare could be because the parent must work to support a household. If for no other reason, financially the daycare is an expense. However if the employment income generated can more than offset the expense then it makes sense but if the income is only paying for the expense, then the child's needs should come first.
I have raised more than one child. My ego took a backseat to their needs. The expectations I have/had for the child(ren) were only that they did the best they could do. Too much competition isn't healthy because failure is a part of life just as much as success is. The difference is how they accept failure (do better next time and be a good sport) or accept success (be happy because it's earned and realize there will always be a winner and a loser).
I disagree with the idea that they will crave attention and be less trusting later in life because the class size influences their personal behavior to survive. The characteristics they have establish at home and learn from home should be by far the most influencial. Each child is an individual and deserves to be treated as such. They each have strenghts and weaknesses.
What a parent may want and what a developing child may want are two entirely different things. A child showing clingy, fear-like, nervous behavior is their way of looking for reinforcement that their new environment is safe. Unfortunately a parent can be the reason a child exhibits such a reaction. Positive talk and body language by the parent is necessary to show the child that it's ok.
Siblings shouldn't be compared to each other, ever. As they grow older their natural likes and dislikes emerge. The world around them will encourage and/or discourage their talents. Let them be themselves and encourage the good behavior. Teach them to read, early. Teach them to share. Teach them to have manners. Teach them love, forgiveness and an understanding that other people have feelings too.
Expectations should be our own mirror and what we expect of ourselves as parents. Realize that their conscience won't start developing until 8 or 9 years old and they do not fully understand that their actions have consequences. Enforce the rules of what is acceptable and what is not, for ourselves as well as for them. The world is full of people who are better off than we are but the world is also full of people who aren't as fortunate as we are. Do the best you can do with what you were born with, nothing less; nothing more.
Thanks for inspiring my reaction to your posted item. I wish you and your child(ren) only the best. Keep writing! Peace always,
Chatabit
#501
Hi. I've read many items since becoming a member and do rate, comment and review most of what I read. Lately I've been reading but not commenting or rating as much. This posting of your item caught my attention.
"the uncertainty" - "deep thought on the world and society"
The topic itself is vast and takes into account everything and anything that involves us as living human beings. What it does not discuss (until the very end) is life (spiritual and/or religion) and a thereafter. Aside from the lack of capitalization, proper punctuation throughout, a few words are not spelled correctly. However if you wanted it to read in a structured sentence form, I think you coulda/woulda done so. I don't believe capitalization or punctuation are considered when we are thinking in "deep thought".
Therefore my comments are about the intent of the feelings conveyed by this writing. Having said that (I had to re-read the posting), the speaker of this writing could be a person but maybe not. These thoughts are shared by me and many others as well. Indeed these thoughts are deep. I have questions but they would be better saved for another writing. The last sentence captures what everything leading up to it can't fix. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing!
Peace always, Chatabit
#500
This is nice because it transitions childhood to becoming an adult, overcoming fear. It was clearly written and is simple in meaning. Well done! Keep writing. Peace always, Chatabit
And to whom it may confuse:
Once again I find myself at your port, reading one of your items. Few and far between I find writers as diverse as this particular item is able to convey. My rating is conservative compared to what I really thought. Each line I was analyzing; looking for the "real" meaning. Great flip-flop of how words are written vs. intent to uncover true meaning. Keep writing! Peace always,
Chatabit
Excellent! I could see her movements, hear the nightmare and feel her pain letting go. Very intense writing. Keep sharing, please.
Peace always,
Chatabit
I like the theme and idea of what the color(s) represent. Creatively written with a vivid imagination. My favorite line is: "Set in a sea of lapis lazuli blue." I know this color because it was my mother's favorite and before she passed away she took the time to show me a photo from a book. (I didn't believe there was really a color named lapis lazuli.) My favorite color also happens to be a deep royal blue.
Like an opal, whether white or black, the finish shines and within there are many colors. Thanks for sharing! Keep writing. Peace always,
Chatabit
Well written! I like the story of being an underdog; to succeed in the end. It can also be said that while on the ladder of success; be careful going up because you'll meet the same people on the way back down. Your choice of words reflect the depth of emotion you have for your friend; empathy yet revenge. Mistakes happen and from them we learn valuable lessons. I wonder if your friend realizes how you feel about their behavior.
It's enough to live our own lives without having to worry about someone else's. The light shines on you no matter how much your friend wants to take it all. The people around you will probably come to the same conclusion. Good luck and keep writing!
Peace always,
Chatabit
My initial reaction: To thy own self be true...
I had to read this several times to understand that (I think) you need not worry which path as they all lead to the same place.
I wanted to find the word "right" because "left" is mentioned three (3) times. Perhaps I was searching for the correct ("right") way to go.
"and left me in a confused mark." should be capitalized..."And...?
The sentence before it ends with a period, maybe omit the period.
I hope I was helpful. Thanks for inviting me to read your port! Chatabit
I enjoy animation of objects, especially in nature. I read it through then read it over again. I'm not sure if the first line "I see trees to calm" should actually read: I see trees too calm. Each sentence could work but have different meaning.
I liked the second form - a soft tree, such as a Birch, tend to bend so it would look like they're talking.
Each of these requires the reader to use their imagination. Thanks for sharing! Chatabit
Sad for this person's loss but happy for the final result. I'm not sure why "pray"; "paper bonds?" and "too" are bold - a significant meaning? The 55-word count was well done to relay such depth of feeling and emotion. (For me personally, I do not think any human being can ever see God.) However, the idea that God was happy is all that really matters in the end. Keep writing! I'll keep reading
Peace always, Chatabit
Great visual feeling to this piece. I have only read two (2) of your items and really enjoy both. Keep writing! I especially liked "For the Sandman watches every whisper" because you relate sight to speech in a non-traditional way...internet communication!
And suggesting that someone else takes on the weight of the world in order to have a restful sleep is very considerate. Thanks for sharing. Peace always, Chatabit
Excellent write! I found this to be unfortunate however, in defeat, you have succeeded (to write such a moving piece). Welcome to writing.com. My favorite line from this is:
"Trying so hard to pretend
That I know what I'm to do"
The visual image here - being captured, mind racing, fight to survive...great thought for the moment! Keep writing! Peace always,
Chatabit
Good writing! I just did one this morning for the grim reaper (also translation from Latin) this was a tribute and dedication. Yours is much erier'rrrr LOL Yes, for all he will come! This guy isn't just for Halloween Keep writing. Peace always,
Chatabit
The storyline was good. I think a few of the sentences need work. "She had sat..." is a long sentence; "she pushed the feat away,..." not easily understood. I don't want to be too critical. Review and comment for
I liked the ending and the descriptive story. There are a few words I would change: slash to gnash, "why such crazed, desperate acts?" to why such a crazed desperate act?, aw to awe, heart is singular change confinements to confinement. Review and comment for
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