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Review of Zimmerman Walked  
Review by Chlogan
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Thank you for reviewing my poem :)

This was interesting to read, although I did get a big of a head ache after reading "this morning" a bit too many times :) I think it's interesting that you referred specifically to Christians. I'm not sure if that means anything. I share your view that Zimmerman definitely should have been found guilty..... Although I do feel sorry for him :( that could be any one of us that mistakenly associated crime with African Americans because they tend to be less wealthy due to their past. I think you could do a better job making a more general statement about racism and discrimination.... I always feel bad when someone is singled out, and my pity goes to not only Martin but also Zimmerman. I hope this isn't considered offensive or anything.
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Review of Yesterday  
Review by Chlogan
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like it, and I think the second stanza is a lot more powerful than the first.
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