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Review of But Mommy!  
Review by chris dean
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good universal Theme, great Imagery, great Dialogue, detailed and palpable Setting well constructed, the Plot was amusing I thought, good Beginning and great Ending,

You are a fine writer and I was surprised that this very enjoyable piece had some grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes. Thank you for letting us read this very good story.
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