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Review of My life  
Review by Justwritin
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hiii Riley!
I hope everything is well.

I have absolutely loved this piece of yours and hope to read more.
The meaning behind this really dug deep into my heart as I felt it.
You give it your all just to be called selfish or not giving enough.

I hope everything will turn out for you, and may God be with you and us all.

However, just a single matter caught my eye.
Firstly, In my opinion, you may take it or not; this is a free space so no worries :)
Your title seemed to not hook me at first, but your description was simple and straight-forward. In my case, i would have loved it if you matched the title with a description

Other than that, I loved it, and keep up the great work!
*Heart*


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Review of Ghost  
Review by Justwritin
Rated: E | (5.0)
LOVE IT!

Well written, perfect choice of words.
I hope to see you write more.

Enjoy!*Heart*


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Review of The Chair  
Review by Justwritin
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there!!
I saw your text in the "Read a Newbie" section, and this piece was absolutely beautiful.

You may call me over-exagerating, but I believe its because of the meaning behind this piece.

People may write and be successful for quality or for meaning.
Anyway, enjoy your time writing. *Heart*
I would love to read more of your work.


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