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Review by Coffeebean
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This starts out pretty well. I'm interested to see what happens throughout the rest of the story! I really liked the idea with the Queen being a fake.

I did notice some slight grammar problems, but those could always be fixed later on. Great job overall.
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