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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
First off, of course you're good enough to post here. I would like to praise you for having correct spelling ( it is rarer than you might think). :)
There are some good and some bad points about your work.
Good: - Mature style ( how old are you?), leaves you wanting more
Bad: - Tags " death, emotional" immediately make people think that the work is some kind of cheap emo-goth thing, written by barely literate prepubescent children, which I hope you're not trying to make :D. Plus, Lilith's character can come off as a little... stereotypical.

Please look at my works too! (The first of which is coming today)
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