This really is good writing. I hope you plan on putting more on here with this story. I feel that it leaves the reader wanting to read more. I have only found a few authors on here that make me want to read more and this is one of em. please keep writing more chapters.
This is truly a great first chapter. I truly hope you are going to add more on here. It is rare that i find writing that grasps onto my attention this quick. I really do believe you have to be one of the best i have read so far. You truly have great talent and i hope you continue
i love this, i definitely can't wait to read more of your writing. As i read this, it was as if i were watching the events unfold before me. I have read a lot of different authors' material, and not too many of them have i felt like i were there. Please write more.
i am so sorry you had to grow up feeling like this and i am sorry if you felt i abandoned you. i Love you lil sis with all my heart and will ALWAYS be here for you.
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