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Review by Conorzzy
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed everything about it. The structure, the easy flow, rolling off the tongue, and good structure.
The message in the poem is beautifully optimistic, and, even for those who may not share the same view, is very inspiring.
Thanks for sharing.

Conor.
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Review by Conorzzy
Rated: E | (4.5)
Enjoyed this, nice read, and very intriguing. I like the way you've, through free verse, brought the physical with the metaphorical. I won'y be making any typos on that anymore!
Thanks for sharing,
Conor.
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Review of Beyond the Black  
Review by Conorzzy
Rated: E | (4.5)
Enjoyed this, thought it was a lovely read. It flows and has good structure, and I like the message in the poem. The only thing I could suggest is if you meant to write 'cannot', instead of 'can not' in the first stanza. I can see merit in both, but I suppose the latter rolls off better.
Nice read.
Thanks,
Conor.
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Review by Conorzzy
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Really liked this, Sorry for a short review, if you can even call it that. I don't have much to say, it takes inspiration to write a poem where the rhymes role off so easily, about a tool!
Thanks for sharing,
Conor.
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Review of Child's Play  
Review by Conorzzy
Rated: E | (4.5)
Fantastic poem. I couldn't help reading when I saw the title. You express a similar sentiment that I've been thinking about. It's simple, but quite accurate. I always relate it to cartoons. They say we're meant to grow out of them, and they're used just for children to learn about life, and indeed we do grow out off them.
Yet, I believe there's actually a lot to be learnt from their intense simplicity. It's very interesting.
Enjoyed, thanks,
Conor.
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Review by Conorzzy
Rated: E | (4.5)
wow, very good way of making this site appealing, enjoyable read, nice work!
Conor.
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