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Review by JGirl23
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is really good. I especially like how you use the same line at the beginning and end of the first 5 stanzas. And the fact that the last stanza doesn't follow that adds more emotion to it and shows what the speaker is feeling. Really good job! :)
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