If there is one thing that i wont tolerate it is making fun of the disabled. I can tell you without the shadow of a doubt that alison is retarded. You need to take a hard look at yourself and decide whether or not this medium is right for you.
I like this story, but there is one problem. I don't know how you managed to change the color of your text or why you would. Thats flashy for this trashy smashy haberdashery. Use normal text you quirky hipster schoolgirl.
This was the bees knees my friend. A classic like this only comes around once in a long time and believe me, I know. Only there was one problem. This tale is a mess of sadness and communism. I see whats going on here. I dont think you will be getting a degree at Stanford in the medical feild anytime soon.
The most difficult part of reading this was keeping my erection down my pants. It provided very real imagery, however the rhymes were a bit of a stretch. It was OK.
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