Uzbekistan's (d-train) Reviews

Wow. This is a very sweet poem. my favorite lines were...

Love comforts us in sadness.
It hears us in times of need.
Without it we'd be much less!
For in us it plants it's seed.

very good job!

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#3615231

Review of Youth Grown Old

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

I thought this poem was amazing. I never thought something about growing up could sound so beautiful. the lines
"The youth begins his journey into time
And must face the world and its whims,
A world which is often ugly and unkind"

are definitely true. This was very well written and a joy to read. I'm not a big fan of rhyming, but this story had a way of makeing it work. The details made me feel like it was happening to me, in stead of a character. Thanks for sharing, I hope to read more of your writing soon.

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#3611923

Review of A Ghost Story

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

She was the ghost. i like this story. very detailed.

5

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#3611902

Review of My Haiku #001

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

good message.

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#3608281

Review of Old Mother Tree

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

this poem is very detailed. i like the descriptions in all the stanzas. there was no weak point in it

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#3604033

Review of MEMORIES

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

this is really short but its deep

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#3603990

Review of Gonna Get There

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

This poem is beautiful. it is very deep. its so descriptive.

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#3603979

Review of The Silver Fox

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

I like this. it has great imagery. i felt like i was there

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#3595949

Review of Gangsta D's Anger

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Dalvin this made my day. it is hilarious and to the point

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#3595943

Review of I Am

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

i liked reading it. it was short sweet and to the point. I can relate to it because i love guns too.

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#3592205

Review of World of Warcraft Nifty Song

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

i dont know much about world of warcraft but this was hilarious. i like how it says this sweet mage killed six. its contradicting. this song completely made my day and is now stuck in my head.