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Review of The Old Boyfriend  
Review by TheDonnster
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Honestly.. I liked it. Not too shallow, but it wasn't in your face either. You used lots of describing details in your story, really allowing the reader to understand everything that they need to know without needing to make up what they think it would look like. The three characters here were very understandable, including Debbie. This Steve dude feels much more important than your letting on as of now, hinted by the title, although I wish there was a bit more dialogue to understand the conflict more clearly, but that's all. I want to hear more from here on out, so good job.
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