there were some tense changes that should not have happened, but other than that, I would LOVE it if you would send an email to me when chapter 3,4,5,6.....however many you create, come into your port...i loved alice and her mirror...
I whole-heartedly agree with you...when I forst came here, he gave me much the same treatment after my first amateur writing... because of him, I have gotten so much better than I thought i ever could...it's really quite kind of him to put up with my constant bad spelling...
always...
your phantasmal lady
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