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Review by Dkay
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A beautiful well written song that couldn't be more true.
If everyone felt like this, we would be making love, not war.

I especially liked the part-

"Can’t they see, can’t they feel, that they don’t have to kill.
Their pride in their country it can survive still.
Can’t they see that they’re breeding generations of hate?"

Good job! Have fun writing.
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Review by Dkay
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is an Intriguing read with a complex plot that just drew me in, and when I got to where you stopped, all I could think was, NO, DON'T STOP NOW! The suspense...!

I like the characters, especially Grady.
The fact that he has a soul, but still does what he has to... even with some twisted humour attached.
The scene where he threatens Fatima is just too good, and then the fact that he fears Karma... I love Grady.

Just a few typos for correction.

"...his mouth watering as the translation to on meaning

"...And old man's dream

Generally, I think this is a must-read.
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