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Review of Heavens of Glory  
Review by Dalman0908
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like your story very,very,very much..and it looks 100 times better then my story.I invite you to rate my story and give me some input as for what I am doing wrong...I renamed it Roundhammer:Birth of the Alliance.So you might give me some input as I said what I need to be doing to improve it.

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I find your story a very interesting concept and very easily readable.The only point of interest is that I notice the Chapter II is a two parter and yet part two of Chapter is writen long after Chapter II..just interesting on how you came about that.Also,I find your characters very interesting...specially Captain Orion...hope I hear from you and that we exchange ideas..and please rate the Roundhammer novel only because Ixion Event is in the proccess of being severely edited by me so its more readable and its more sane...thank you and keep up the good work
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