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Review by Danielle
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Ok, I'm a new writer so I don't know that I'll be the best to take advice from. I think the story is interesting. I would definitely keep reading. I read a lot and it captured my interest. There are a few spelling errors and a couple places are hard to read. (And he is a know) I'm guessing should be known but its very minor. (She was the youngest of us all, with her nineteen years. She never seemed so very young, though,) This sounds a little odd. Overall I thought it was good. I would appreciate if you could review me as well but its ok if you don't want to its a YA novel as well.
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