I liked: The way you really related to what you are writing about. You're evidently very fond of your cat and I feel you expressed this really well in your writing.
Favourite part: You symbolize forgiveness and unending love because no matter how many times I may step on your tail you will still love me.
I liked this because it tied in with what I mentioned before; it shows clearly that you are very fond of your writing subject. I also liked the use of your vocabulary.
Suggestions for improvement: I spotted one or two punctuation errors in there which you might want to check back over. Other than that, I think it was really good.
Overall comments: I thought this was a really original piece that you have expressed well with words straight from your heart and this really shows through in the piece. Well done!
With love,
Rose. :D
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A review by Rose
I liked: The way you really related to what you are writing about. You're evidently very fond of your cat and I feel you expressed this really well in your writing. 
Favourite part: You symbolize forgiveness and unending love because no matter how many times I may step on your tail you will still love me. 
Suggestions for improvement: I spotted one or two punctuation errors in there which you might want to check back over. Other than that, I think it was really good. 
Overall comments: I thought this was a really original piece that you have expressed well with words straight from your heart and this really shows through in the piece. Well done!