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8 Total Reviews Given
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Review of THE LAST WHAT IF  
Review by Daurla
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!
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Review by Daurla
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the use of the boy's imagination in spinning this tale. I could envision myself as a young child, causing trouble while merely living a dream.

Very well written, keep up the good work.
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Review of Trick or Tweet  
Review by Daurla
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am crying! How true this story could become and how positive we should be that this exact thing can happen. The concepts brought about by "Trick or Tweet" are far from fictional as this world lives for technology and most everything depends on it. I was pulled into the story line first by the way the main character was "recording" it. The emotions involved and the fear felt were very real to me as I was mezmorized in my readings. I am an avid reader of suspense and this story fits that department to the tee. Keep up the great work and give me more, more, more!
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Review of Silent Valentine  
Review by Daurla
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW, that made me tear up! Don't do that again *Smile* Just kidding, keep up the emotional depth and tales of your heart. It really catches the reader imagination.
Keep up the great work!!!
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Review by Daurla
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a very cute and uplifting piece. The man folly was an amusing titter and his fate was inevitable but humorous. Now realize that's from a female's point of view. Sometimes men don't know any better!!!!
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Review by Daurla
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great job capturing the intenseness of her life! Keep up the good job.
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Review of RED SKELETON  
Review by Daurla
Rated: E | (2.0)
I appreciate the effort to make this "real" but unfortunately it didn't capture my attention. I seemed to emotionless. Sorry. Keep up the good work tho, you are very good.
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Review of FLEET STREET  
Review by Daurla
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very thrilling!! I felt like I was really there. You stimulated my emotions and my imagination.
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