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Review of Scars  
Review by MayDay
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a heart-touching story, Ollieamy . I hope those children are able to forgive their father someday, but he should repent of his sins first. Has he? Has he begged for forgiveness, not because he needs care but because he truly feels sorry? I'm glad those kids care for him now, despite what he did in his earlier years. I think if I were in the father's position, I'd feed my kids from the start.

I think if I were in the son's position, I'd love him despite what he did. I'd try to tell him about God and His mercy and grace. I might even tell him the famous line from the Lego Movie(s), "You don't have to be the bad guy."


Welcome to WDC, Ollieamy. I hope you enjoy reading and writing here.
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