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Review of Early Poetry

Review by Elle Dratwood

Rated: 13+

| (2.5)

I like it, but be more creative with metaphor, I know you're describing grey, but go deeper. You'll enjoy it.

Also, I think you can take itching further, really go for the sensation, I want to itch while reading it.

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