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Review of The Desert  
Review by debbiew1000
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very good!! It made me ubderstand a little of what our fighting men and women go thru overseas. It made me feel like I was there. Also, made me stop and really think of what Americans take for granted. Thank you for serving. Thank you for writing this also and letting me read it.
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Review by debbiew1000
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
very interesting! It was interesting and basically tells a story of God's love and the good and evil in the world. Thank you
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Review by debbiew1000
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like it because it is very encouraging and uplifting. thank you
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Review by debbiew1000
Rated: E | (2.5)
Very short. good start for a short story, but needed something just a little extra to see where the author is going. Thank you for letting me read this.
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Review by debbiew1000
Rated: E | (3.5)
It is a short and sweet poem. It is easy to understand and a caring piece about 2 sons. thanks for letting me read it.
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Review by debbiew1000
Rated: E | (3.5)
Thank you for letting me read this. I have wondered myself what death or dying may be like. I think you have captured feelings on what someone may go thru. The piece really makes me stop and think about what it really is to actually be at death's door.Overall, I think you wrote a good piece and if you write more, I really would like to read it. Thank you
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Review by debbiew1000
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I would like to become a member of your group. I just began with a free membershiup, but want to upgrade. I hope to have something in my portfolio in the near future. I love reading and writing and would a very involved member. Hope you will consider me
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Review by debbiew1000
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This was an interesting piece to review. It has a little historical hint in it, the story itself was good. It moved on, was not dragged down by a lot of detail and took something that was used for evil and made it into something good. Overall, the story line was something that could very well be expanded on.
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