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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hope you dont mind me looking at some of your work KJO, but I was intrigued to know whether you knew what you were talking about!

Quite clearly you do.

This is a lovely piece, full of that bitter pain we all feel at the end of relationships, never knowing if the grass is greener. I especially like the way you've not resolved anything at the end. Its exactly how we all feel isnt it, not knowing what will come next. Its exactly the right decision and as actors say, always leave them wanting more.
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Congratulations again. If I ever get to this standard I will be thrilled.

Debussi
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