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Review of Our Family Secret  
Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am laughing. This story was so funny. It was very believable too. You write very well and it flows easily. I wonder what my family would think if our dogs talked? It's really something to think about. I know that animals are smart and do things on purpose...hmmm!
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Review of Second Chances  
Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
A dream inside of a story. Nicely done. I enjoyed this. Work on some of your punctuation though. Great job.
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Review of TOO COCKY BY HALF  
Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was too funny. Did it really happen? Good writing style.
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Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: E | (3.0)
I like the story and the tone. You could work on your punctuation and run-on sentences. Good character names (my DD is Sophie),and interactions. It's a bit wistful and comforting. Keep up your writing. Nice work.
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Review of Kevin  
Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice. Your story makes me miss my cousin who died at a very young age. Your writing style is great and makes a great read. Keep up the good work.
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Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
That was pretty cool. I liked it. At first I thought it was the princess' point of view, but I enjoyed the wicked queen's side. There are, after all, two sides to every story.
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Review of Alone  
Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: E | (3.5)
Very sad. I felt this way last year. Good verse.
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Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
That was pretty awesome. What if things didn't work out for Cinderella and her prince? Yeah, I'd go into a fit of depression too. Sometimes thought, love catches you by surprise. Loved it.
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Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Good writing. Well constructed sentences and great punctuation. Very interesting story. Can't wait to read more. Keep it up.
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Review of Great Aunt Daphne  
Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Cute, short, to the point. Funny story.
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Review of The Music Box  
Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This was an interesting story. Some of the ideas jumped around and didn't really seem to go together. Keep working on this. Maybe you could give a clue from the diary that leads to the key in the clown. It's a very good idea and has good potential. Keep up the writing.
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Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Good beginning. Sounds like an interesting story. What comes next? Keep up the good work.
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Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked the fact that the man was finally going to meet his mother. Some of the sentences ran together and I got a little confused, but it was a nice story. Keep working at it. You are doing great.
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Review of Beths Ring  
for entry "Chapter one" 
Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Okay, I like the premise of this story. Sounds almost paranormal. Some of your sentences are run-on, but otherwise pretty good. I hope that you will continue with and finish this story. I'd love to know how this story pans out. Please keep writing. It really sounds promising. Good luck.
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Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: E | (4.0)
Cute.
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Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I liked the story and your idea. I could feel that Drea really cared about Talan, and the other way around. Keep working on it. Your spelling and punctuation need some work. Keep a small college dictionary on hand. Good work and good luck with your writing.
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Review of Jimmie  
Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
That was sad. I lost a friend to soon in highschool. Very nicely written. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Friend in Need  
Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very sad. I wish that Chloe could help the little girl. Good writing.
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Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very sweet story.
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Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow. How very sand and intense. Thanks goodness we don't feel each other's grief so intensely, otherwise we'd stop living. Awesome.
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Review by Dougless Raine
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Pretty cool. I enjoyed this story. Very descriptive and intriguing. Keep up the great work.
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