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Review by Deni Tea
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your introduction, which described a poor hungry child living in a farmhouse, immediately grabbed my attention. When I discovered that the child was Mary McLeod Bethune, your story was not only interesting, but educational and inspirational. Your writing made me want to know more about the details of her life. I was not certain what Mayesville was in the story, but I did Google it. Thank you.
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Review by Deni Tea
Rated: E | (4.5)
Entertaining. Good advice. Well-organized paragraphs. Lines are too close for easy reading, but maybe that is not your fault.
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Review by Deni Tea
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed the rhyme and the moral to the story about war and peace. I think it should be far-off land instead of far off. Your ending is memorable.
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