Diana Joyce's (dianahottiee) Reviews

Diana Joyce

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8 Public Reviews Given

19 Total Reviews Given

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#1373882

Review of The Dreaded Eye-O-You

Review by Diana Joyce

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

LOL I loved this.. Very well done and put together, I not only have a friend like this I have a TWIN brother who is one and the same.. If there is anything that needs to be fixed I can't see it. BUT I am new to writing and I can't see errors like everyone else can. But I saw none I know of in your witty poem. I really enjoyed this very much thank you.

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#1373869

Review of FRIENDSHIP BETRAYED-- Editor’s choice

Review by Diana Joyce

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Very well writen, Sad in a way because I so understand what your poem is trying to say. My fav line in your poem is the ending because it rings so true

Do not lead to reunion of
Betrayer and betrayed

I can't give any advise on how to correct anything if it needs be, Because I am new. I can only say I enjoyed reading a poem, like I did this one thank you

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#1369088

Review of Birmingham

Review by Diana Joyce

Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

beautifuly written, I could see and feel what the people where talking about. I enjoyed very much reading this and am very proud when I see someone like you being true to there talent. I wish I could help you with
grammar spelling suggestion or anything regarding punctuation but if you read anything of mine you will see I am really NO GOOD at that at all lol. Hugs Thank you

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#1369081

Review of The Last Page (1)

Review by Diana Joyce

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

wow amazing.. This makes me want to read the whole book.. And more. I am going to have to go to your portfolio and read what else you have. I know that if I had this book I would not put it down till I was done. inspirational to read someone with so much talent, You are an artest. Your craft is well worded and you can picture things as you read what is going on, I wish I had more gift points, but I have just started out and I have less than 120. And I want to review all I can. Now I have no idea about
grammar spelling suggestion or anything regarding punctuation because I my self and so new and would not know if you were off or not on them. I love this thank you awesome if I had more gps i would give you more! Thank you

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#1369072

Review of The Girl

Review by Diana Joyce

Rated: E

| (4.5)

inspirational amnd funny, Very true to your craft. I have no idea about
grammar spelling suggestion or anything regarding punctuation because I my self and so new and would not know if you were off or not on them. I love this thank you awesome if I had more gps i would give you more!