This was a highly entertaining poem with a great sense of humor π! It also set the record straight on how you got your WDC name and kept it across the board πΉ makes sense!
I didn't find any typos or something to be corrected either.
I'm also curious π( like George) as to where Andre is these days?
Enquiring minds want to know!
Write βοΈ on Indeed.
Aww, thanks for sharing this one π!
It brings back memories of kids and grandkids!
I like the style of your writing in this to show emphasis π₯!
I didn't see any typos or anything to correct.
It was a sweet piece to take a word picture of the moment's and provide nice π΅ memories!
Loved it π! You did a great job with the clues!
I got em all right, so yes I do remember β€οΈπΊ and so glad π you do too!
I gave you five stars for your creative idea and the work you put into it.
I couldn't find any typos or errors in it either!
I hope folks join in and share their scores .
I'll post in comments!
You show deep meaning in your words using simplicity.
In an old grammar book by Stark and White, it says " omit needless words!"
You did this well and made your points π.
I didn't find any typos either!
Welcome to WDC and write on.
My dear thanks for sharing these heartfelt moments of your lovely Gracie πΉπ.
I believe in the rainbow π bridge π where the pet πΆ children of ours are happy and wait for us.
I didn't see any typos or anything.
I'm touched by the expression of your experience and can totally relate being in the same situations over the years.
Take π heart they are always with us in spirit.
Hugs π€
I found this an interesting post π! Your descriptions of China and life there were very informative and enjoyable to read! It would help if you used more spacing between paragraphs to make it easier to read. Besides that, it was a good read, and hope you will be writing more on your experiences!
A lovely piece for the class assignment! You did a very expressive job of showing ( not telling) about Joey's embarrassment and other emotions. The storyline was interesting and engaging. The environment and the residents are spot-on. ( As one who has been a Nurse assistant and volunteer.)
It was an enjoyable read with a charming ending!
Write βοΈ on indeed π!
Bless all involved for making this a beautiful remembrance space and allowing people who would never benefit from reading these special authors a chance to experience the words they chose to βοΈ. Because it exists they can still live on to inspire others like myself.
(I pray when my time comes, to be remembered in this way)
Thanks to all who maintain this sacred space. I will make it a favorite to visit and understand these folks. Bright Blessing's to all and God G-d bless you.
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Hi there was looking around for special things to review and found your awesome blog! It was very welcoming upon my first glance and it was fun, interesting and inspiring as well. You tackle many subjects in your posts. I'm glad an angel gave you an upgrade because you really put it to good use! I saw a video link you shared and I saved your blog to my color notes πΆ app, so can follow your journey as well!
Didn't find any typos or " Sp's" which is spelling errors! Years ago my English teacher ( rest his soul) would write SP in red and my sister and I would tease back saying Sspp!
Anyway have a safe blessed day and keep Writing On indeed π!
Wow I started at the end and will have to start at one, besides that am glad this entry was the one I started with! You wrote with a lot of passion for writing and besides the only 4 misspelled words ( you did give us a heads-up about letting the writing flow and editing later! In Steven King's book " On Writing" When you write, write
When you edit, edit. True words π!)
You put so much energy into this teaching piece. There's good pointers on the process of writing and also your day to day descriptions of how to handle distractions, which as you truthfully put can't always be ignored. Looking forward to reading more of this!
Thanks for representing us disABILITY writers and bringing Awareness!
Write βοΈ on indeed!!!
I admire your courage in sharing what you went through. I'm praying π as am writing this will have a blessed ending.
You have a very unique style of writing with is so real and down to earth. Will keep reading as it so matters to know you are ok, after all you've been through. And how you didn't back down!!! Happy Ground hogs day ( which led me here!)
I loved reading this! Adorable yet good thought provoking... I'm going to share it with others. You hit the nail right on the head!
The truth he tells is so simple and how many ever get it?
It was told well and far as I can see,no misspelled words.
Will be checking out your other works. Write βοΈ on indeed!
This is an awesome and beautiful well written slice of true life. Your descriptions are spot on! ( as a former C.N.A who also worked with many types of client's as these and the elderly, Indeed we do it for love.) I hope those who will find comfort in reading this and those who would benefit by learning from it will take the time to. There are so many misconceptions about mental illness. It has always been my prayer that people would do more research to see that not all are harmful. Many are good kind people trying to escape the prison of their personal labyrinth and live a normal life. Thanks for writing this and letting me share it! Oh no typo issues!
Sage needed a capital but I really enjoyed reading this and the imagery.
I would have liked a second stanza to continue your short "adventure".
Standing alone as it is, it works. Showing the contrast of " the barren trees" against the serenity of sage.
This was a very moving piece and using the viewpoint of the deer fits perfectly.(As one who lived many years in Oregon and saw the changes there to nature...)
Your imagery is spot on and even one who has never been so close to nature can understand this story. And I would hope feel it in their heart, as I have. Write on you have a blessed beautiful gift! Thanks for writing this.
I sometimes wondered why you chose the name "Dogpack". After reading this inspired article about the why's and the sharing of your experience and writers soul I feel blessed to know you, even more! It's written from your heart and soul. You have an important mission and hoping more people will learn from you β€οΈπ―οΈ. And become more inspired as I have today π! Bless you always.
OMG π³ I loved your take on customer service and your attitude! I feel like you were taking about my life!
I sent this to my sister to read,as we are going through the same situations!
You are very consise and described your experience with great with and humor! Glad I dropped by and will again. Write on indeed π!
Your an amazing woman with so much talent! I just read this and have learned so much about the world you grew up in and the loving family who encouraged you to write on!You have a way with words indeed π€ . I've been away from writing and it's very refreshing to find inspiration in it. I've been struggling with my own challenges ( am I too old to continue?)
You have a good spark of light π―οΈ that's what this world really needs!
I came in not realizing it's chapter 3! Your character drew me in.
It was a good read with real life details and a lot of spirit! The conversation made clear sense and showed instead of just telling what was going on and in her head. Looking forward to reading more of your writing βΊοΈ!
Very powerful in visuals and thought of the unending flow of life. Your words are concise and flow!
I see no way to improve this lest you make it longer.
I enjoyed reading this inspired retelling of a true story. It explains in part the why's of Jewish beliefs to someone who may not even know about it. It shows by having patience we discover good things about another and can be an inspiration for them and others. I hope you return to continue writing indeed πππ―οΈπ―οΈ!
It didn't take long to understand the feelings of your humanity behind the frame. Beyond the stage we play/live our choices to continue another episode. I can sooo relate to the truth behind the words. Bless you for caring enough to share your moods and heart. As one who wore my Scrubs proudly many moons ago. You keep telling it like it is! The spacing needs a bit of work for reading better for some.
Write on and welcome indeed!
Wow this totally blew me away!
After hearing that song in the challenge amazing what folks are bringing to this table indeed.
So much attention in detail and plot. A stunning array of words and meanings looped into a telling tale of future yet present of what the collective mind is dealing with.
The end ( Though wanting to see more!)
Was amazing and put collective prayers in one focus hope.
Loved the line about (... dotted with distant stars)
Thanks for sharing this! Zei gezunt be well.
Hi I saved this to review and after many tries(My family keeps me very busy),finally finished reading. I wish you would finish this! It is a good story,a few grammar issues,nothing that bad! IF you do reply,I will reread it and show where the few things were. It is a beautiful story,That I pray gets an ending as well!
Zei Gezunt,be well!
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