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Hello,
My name is Daniel, and I found this really helpful, and about what you say about the words LOVE and DOVE I agree. So I revised my poem and would like for you to review it and give your thoughts on it. Below is the original verse and was in the fifth stanza. Tell me what you think about the revised stanza and the rest as well. Thank you in advance for your time and any advice you can give.

Inquest for that one to love,
to turn my raven, to a dove.
Benighted minds, can be as one,
and chase the darkness from the sun.
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