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Review by doc
Rated: E | (4.0)
i can't tell you any tips on improvement. for prayer is as i believe i just read . just that . a talk with God. the substance said i wanted to pray with him. the idea. what do I pray. the ending. what the almighty put in yur heart. " The fervent effectual prayer of a righteous man availeth much. " That then is what the perfect prayer is. This was put across and came across. I believe that many will take away some inspiration from this poem;"prayer" . your last thought." This spirit-filled man, I had put on the spot, patiently waited for the answer he sought. " i get a duality of thought. both the man and the God which i really understood to be the Holy spirit and the body of Christ. The Triune spirit. Brought to us in Christ, spoken to us by The Spirit instituted by God. We as The bride and Christ will make many Sons. I Got a lot of hope. Others will too.
Please excuse my run-on sentence structure. But I cannot divide that which is. Our English and Latin roots Hurt our older word roots. That Hebrew and perfect language of absolutes. This idea was also captured in your poem..Nice. Thank you for letting me share this prayer."poem"
donald
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Review by doc
Rated: E | (2.5)
I read this poem and the first thing I thought of " tweety" gets in a hurry,. just like me. The second was; " I do understand it. it is a feeling and thought that I experiance on a regular basis. My third impression was "its eclectic, You must reread it and you must have a fore knowledge of the emotions expressed. I enjoyed it and brought away several updates on my own.
thank you
donald
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