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Review of The Abyss  
Review by dodyfields
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I like the poem. It is a sad poem esp. when you say you have lived a life without love. Is it just a poem or are there some facts behind it. It is very real and I can identify. dodyfields
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Review by dodyfields
Rated: E | (4.0)
It is worded so well. I can feel the lonliness and it makes me feel so sad. I would say that at least there is life in the both of them, but that does not seem to be enough. well written. The way you phrase your words is a gift. dodyfields carry on
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Review by dodyfields
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
. IT KEPT ME INTERESTED AND IT MADE ME WONDER WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT. WAS IT A MAN AND A WOMAN OR TWO MEN THAT WERE IN LOVE FOR AT THE LAST THE STORY SAID THAT T HE PERSON WENT UPSTAIRS AND HAD HIS BOXERS ON. I THOUGHT THE MAN HAD DIED. .I CAN IMAGINE THE PAIN WHEN HE WAS GONE AND DID NOT RETURN. NOT KNOWING IS VERY VERY HARD FOR WE ALL NEED CLOSURE. I LIKE THIS STORY. DODY. FIELDS
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Review by dodyfields
Rated: E | (5.0)
very well done.excellent in fact. You are so descriptive and it seems as if you see ahead,like seeing the whole picture.. I like it very much. I can't wait to see your next poem. I did not know writing meant so much to you. It seems that God has opened a door for you. I am glad that he did. God Bless. Dody Fields.
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