So the mystery behind the wall is finally revealed. I suspected that the people living on the other side were different from the people that Dove knew on her side of the wall. I never suspected Violette and her side of the wall to be so elegant and luxurious. You have outdone yourself once again with this new chapter of your story. Keep it up! Can't wait for part 5!
Another amazing part to another amazing story. You were right that you revised Part 2 and Part 3 but you only made them even better. I especially love the juxtaposition between the main story and the italicized paragraphs at the end, which I presume will eventually explain the reason for the wall being built and why people chose to live apart on different sides of the wall.
I read the first chapter of this story and was instantly hooked! The author wrote in a away that drew you in instantly and left you wanting to know the cause of the incident. Gonna read the other chapters with great delight!
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