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Review of Free Fall  
Review by bardothodol
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Really Nice. I have to believe that you've been there and done that. I want to read more.
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Review of Presence  
Review by bardothodol
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
very very nice
i look forward to reading some more of your stuff
but i too wanted to hear the answer to Usuna's question!!
if i may humbly add one critique-be careful with your descriptors:
-there was some redundancy
-some were not in sync with the descriptee
-some phrases could more effectively be replaced with a single word before the object of description
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