You tried to explain a very difficult concept in a short amount of time.And You did well in My preception.
I have a joke punchline that is part of my life philosophy.
"Like the Indians said to Columbus,You discover Us,We dicover You,it is all in how you look at it.
We all precieve through our own fog(all our preconcieved ideas) and sometime the fog clears and we see clearly,but only momentarily.But if we keep looking our preceptions will change and the fog will clear more often.
Supposedly we have all the knowledge(like when you know something and don't know how you knew it)but we just don't know how to access it on a consistent basis.
Ok,enough said,good job on a very weighty subject.
I would like to express a big congrats!
The story was fabulous and the content even more so.I will read more.So get writing.
Also there are a few forums you might want to look at.Philosophy Rocks is one and Rant on Religion ( might be Religious Rant I forget)the other fun places to express an opinion.
It started out just fine and may have been true,however a little more intrigue on either the cover up or safe but soggy return of the mags would have made a better story.Like that nights dinner didn't sit well with the entire troop and the magazines were good TP and that was about as close as any action you would be gettin from that german women.
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