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Review by tink fable
Rated: E | (4.0)
Creepy!! Your work's imagery is provocative and well written so that the reader can just imagine the spider(s) crawling on them at night, almost enough for the reader to promise to never kill a spider again! Nice job!

The only reason I didn't give a close to perfect rating is that there were some lines that didn't flow with the work as a whole as well as others did. Two exapmples of this are the transitions between lines 5 and 6 and lines 9 and 10.
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