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Review by Dragonlord443
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dragonlord443
I hope this goes through. I'm not really sure if I'm doing this right. Please, Please may I have an upgrade.
Not to give a sad story, but. I've been out of work for over a year and... well, you know time are a little tough.
Thank you for your time
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Review by Dragonlord443
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
To me a witch IS a worshiper of nature with Gods and/ or Godesses, but also they have magical abilities. Yes, ride brooms and cast the old magical spell or ten.
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Review by Dragonlord443
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
i think you've done a really good job on this. I can't fault you on the grammer or spelling. because I'm not all that good with grammer. but I liked the story line and the plot so far. I hope there's more to come and I hope I can find it. Please keep this going. It's good, it kept me interested and wantint to read more. I didn't see any dead spot and it just flowed. It was an easy read.
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Review by Dragonlord443
Rated: E | (2.0)
I think this is something that you should go ahead with. As to being feasible? I think it is, I don't see why it shouldn't be. You have vamps, weres, witches, fairies and fighting between them and mortals, all the things that like in a story of this type. I can't wait to see how it goes.
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