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Review of Sincerely Me  
Review by Dennis
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
I am happy for you that you have come to grips with some love issues in your life, but I think that you are still at a superficial level. Your writing made me feel sad, because it sounds like you are lost. The writing could have been broken up into shorter paragraphs and maybe expanding on some thoughts you've had would explain your feelings better. :)
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