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Review of The Haunting Hero  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow....very powerful!
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Love the last line...
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Review of HEART'S HOME  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.0)
"It is raining but no water
Why? Striking too"

Wonderful metaphor!
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Review of Joy  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice piece...author repeats the word "world" in the same sentence...something to be avoided in general.
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (5.0)
"Strength is most pure, honest, and able,
And most likely to yield recompense;
Evolving to human requires setting the table
With God’s merciful kindness and sense."

Wow!
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Review of Unbelievable Love  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow, lucky person...powerful piece!
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Review of End of Summer  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very visual:)
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (3.5)
A little confused by the "big old bear" reference. Good use of eye rhymes:) As a lit. prof., I always tell my students that the syncopation should trump the sound of the word endings.
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