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102 Public Reviews Given
102 Total Reviews Given
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Review of If I  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, powerful piece!
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Review of A Horse Of Legend  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.0)
Go Justify!
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (5.0)
Can see this woman very clearly. Excellent imagery!
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Review of Warning.  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like it..."Go slowly, but don't be so wary that you fail to appreciate what you have":)
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Review of Black and White  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Can almost feel the '40s again...
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (5.0)
Kind of like people:)
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Like how you end it without concluding punctuation:)
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Review of Restrictions.  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.0)
Know that feeling...
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful imagery!
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Review of I Love Me, Too  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
One of life's most important lessons!
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Review of Cracks  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Alt. title: "You shoulda' seen the other guy" :)
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
"The greatest trick the devil ever pulled was convincing the world he didn't exist."
But yet he's in all the details:)
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (5.0)
"set in stone truths." I'm assuming these are that we can't win??
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Review of The Gift  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger:)
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Review of Wild Flowers  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
"the states..." This sounds like a long (but exciting!) run:)
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Review of BANG!  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
Hahaha...unfortunately the rating system minimum is 1 star. Very clever...not quite clear to me what the negative aspects are supposed to be though.
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very creative...
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Review of Day 12 - 2.7.13  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very touching...I'm the same kind of sap for nostalgia.
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Review of Saltwater Room  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good start...

"had run"
"pendant around my neck" (avoid repetition like the plague).
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Review of A Long Walk  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful sentiment...
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (5.0)
Couldn't agree more...
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
"A true story"...cool.
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Review by DTwrtr
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A check of love's ardor...sounds very Sydney-esque.
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Review of You Wink  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hahaha...love it!
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Review of Ebb  
Review by DTwrtr
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very well constructed...
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